Cat and Mouse

off the top of my head?? lol

     " Cat And Mouse "

A clumsy grey cat sits warmly in his house,

When in the corner of his eye he spots a sneaky mouse,

The mouse starts to snicker,

And moves a little quicker,

The cat jumps to his feet,

Pissed off because of this mouse,

Stretches out his claws and jumps out for the pounce,

But this cat was smart and new the rap,

So he made an objective to set the perfect trap,

He grabbed all the string, the spikes and springs,

Peices of glass and all sorts of sharp a*s things,

He set it all great,

Deffently pleased,

With the use of an old lure,

A single piece of cheese,

Welllll.........

In the next room stirred the mouse,

With a growling stomach,

A drip of drool drops from his mouth,

He turns his head slightly,

So happy for what he sees

He smiles and starts to run toward,

None other than the cheese,

The cat see's the mouse running,

And gets ready to pull the string,

As soon as the mouse grabs it,

The cat yanks,

Shiwng!!

Suddenly, there was a bang,

It was so bright and so loud,

It made the cats ears ring,

The cat opened his eyes to laugh at what he's done,

But he was stairing down the barrell,

Of the Mouses Big Shotgun,

 

 

 

Moral of the story........

Dont f**k with mice

 

Reviews

[la Abeja]

This is great! You did a good job of setting the scene with sounds and vivid pictures and I love the twisted ending. Keep it up!