MAZE

Cautious like a glass cup and heavy like a bucket filled with guilt, evasions wont work for this industry 

fabricated memories just to pass the time, words said on purpose to indent your mind

nothing compared to your lyrical massacre of the heart

dangerously close to being contagious, is any of this taking affect?

Just to be around, anonymously being told to drop dead, much easier than previously thought before but not as much fun

aimless but yet calculated, a dirty maze is what you inherit

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Cautious like a glass cup and heavy like a bucket filled with guilt, evasions wont work for this industry

Two very clever lines here: "Cautious like a glass cup" and " heavy like
a bucket filled with guilt". Not sure of the meanting in the next part of
the line, still it is filled with symbolism and meaningful to some.

"Fabrocated memories just to pass the time" . Not sure who is saying
this,or thinking it, but I love it . You dig deep and come up with great
lines.
Thank you,
---- John

[Mercedes Sanchez]

oh thank very much. i really appreciate it.

[....]

deep and intriguing, written profoundly.

[nigrum homonculus]

your wordplay and vocab is actually insane. very beautiful. well done

[Mercedes Sanchez]

thank you for taking your time to read and reviewing :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

i think I understand most of this...I am a bit dim I suppose...But it all sounds great...terrific imagery I love the lyrical massacre of the heart

[Mercedes Sanchez]

thank you lol i guess because i wrote it only i would be able to understand all of it lol but thank you for taking your time to read