Curiosity and Disapointment

Curiosity and Disapointment

A Chapter by MagicHearts
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Chapter 2:

            “Dallas, tell it what is in it!” Sam and I shouted at the same time.

            “It… It… It’s just another box…” Dallas whimpered.     

            “Oh Dallas, wait let me see.”  I said, holding the second box in my hands and studied it.

            We decided to go home then, and come back later " but we took the box.

          Dear Diary,                             4:34 pm

I still can’t believe there was just another box in the box we found. We told my dad and he said “Things we happen the way God wants it”. I suppose we understand, Sam and me, but not Dallas.

          Mom said the same thing as Dad but she was … more … sophisticated about it I guess.

          I got this letter from David; he goes to Sam’s, Dallas’s and my school, and it said,

Dear Izzy,

            I like you a lot. I am wondering if you’d like to go to out with me, maybe Friday at 7pm.

David

It will be boring but I want to make fun of him with Sam and Dallas when I get home, after.

Izzy the Dizzy

P.s. I think I might like David!



© 2010 MagicHearts


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Shortest Chapter I've ever seen, more action and stuff. Kind of Boring. Like they should have opened the box and like IDK found a bomb???? More ACTION! Mix you chapters to make them longer.

Luv U Sis!!!!!!!

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