Shatter

 

 

Glittering fragments

of falling glass

splinter in sunlight

and fall in the grass.

 

 

The resounding sound

of the fired gun

eats through the skull

and darkens the sun.

 

 

Reviews

[The dark story]

dark and chaotic with impeccable nice rhyming scheme.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you so much!! ^_^

[Kuro]

Very dark, but it has its own twisted beauty. Excellent work!

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :)

[Lamis]

Perfect rhyming and has a melody to it, a dark one..
Well done!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks so much!! :) I truly appreciate your reviews!!

[Jack...]

Now this one was very cool. The message so blunt and to the point but softened with darkness like a velvet veil.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading my work Jack. :) I'm so happy you liked it!

[Akashi]

It breathes creativity and is marvelous in all sorts of mystical ways..... hee hee hee....

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Akashi]

You are quite welcome.