Lunacitic Song

          

 

 

                                     Falling--

           Head over heels crazy.

                                                              Not into love,

                               but into insanity.

 

                                       Down--

           That's the way I go.

                     Deteriorating interiorly,

                          while I laugh and sing

                                      My lunacitic song...

 

       ~Stitches stretched

                          to stop your screams

upon your lips...                

               Though you beg for mercy?

no!

         Pulled tightened--tighter...

Maniacal grins will hold you down

   They can't hear you.~

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Came up with this a while ago in a fit of craziness... And crazy people tend to not make much sense... Yup.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

In a life, "there's too too many lights but some creepers always make it low from bright"...
Insanity's awesome but at an extent... some people make it bad with their bad work, your this write reminds me about peoples' "Bullshits" what they do every time...and spoil others life. You've to write more on it i must say...
you remind me about people's bullshits by your amazing first stanza but on the other hand you reminded me about poorer's life by writing the last stanza... i don't know why i'm comparing this here but i know i loved this piece and read this deeply and of course compared it with everyone's life....

Beautiful work indeed, this time, you did a better job. 100 marks to you to you this victory :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks again Inspiring!!! Getting your reviews make me very happy! (:

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome, "Insanity" !!!!!!!! :) Keep posting such kinda nice and awesome writes, i'd love to make you smiley and happy all the time :) Haha :)

[Lamis]

When you come to think of it who isn't a lunatic? I love the way you had our eyes fall with the lines and *boom* we were down finding ourselves as insane as your poem..
It's insanely amazing!

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you so much!! :D I'm so glad you liked it. ^_^

[Blissful Sin]

I LOVE IT. Everything about it gets to me!

I think that insanity is the time when one sees the actual universe for what it is, but since own fragile human minds cant handle the knowledge, we go over the edgy thus causing insanity. I may sound crazy when I say this but if I could go insane for one day, I would without hesitation say yes.

-Bliss

[InsanityWriter]

I believe ya, that sounds about right... ;) Anyhoo, thanks so much for you're review!! ^_^