Silent Hill

Based off of 'Silent Hill.'

The falling ash

Silent Hill
The siren sounds
And blood does spill.
Take refuge with one evil
Who shall try to burn you, or
Keep outside with another
Who will hunt, and find, and kill.
Blood weeps the walls,
Again the wailing calls.
Monsters, screams,
Hellish beings
Roam about this town.
To where is that small child
Running around?

Author's Note

I'm not too big on video games, so this is based on the movie. :) If any of you have ever never watched 'Silent Hill,' do it. The suspense is excellent, as are the special effects. ^_^

If you don't like horror though... Don't.

Reviews

[unshakenScene]

wow this is good is really powerful if you can get into it i love it tho

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading!! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

[unshakenScene]

i did

[Rachel Hanne]

Woah. Really deep! Oh my gosh I felt my chest get tight at this! It's a great write, it sent chills up my spine. I can imagine what it looked like and everything! Try adding a little more about the hellish beings, I'd like to know a little more about what they look like.

[InsanityWriter]

They're indescribable... Watch the movie and you'll know what I mean. ;) Thsnks for reading!!

[Sarahthirk]

This is really intense. I can almost feel the terror. I can picture it. You put a ton of specifics in there. Im not a fan of horror movies though, so I don't think I'd do well with that. Haha! But this is great :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading! (: I'm happy you enjoyed it.

[Patrick Henry]

This so confusing how to comment on a poem that is wick freakin' cool and one of my favorite movies. Your poem adds to my interest and love for the movie, and still I am without words that are of any use to you, probably!! : ) I WILL say, that if you wrote the part where the lady "mother" is on the stairs and yells "Filth and Lies! Filth and Lies!" .....THAT would have given me the shivers!! I want to favorite it, just to SEE if you write that in!! lol Great poem..... xoxo -Mark

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading!! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. (:

[Patrick Henry]

I like your "warning" for the horror movie thing. : ) Want to see one of the most messed up parts of ANY horror movie? Watch the movie "Seed" and watch the last murder in the movie. : ) You might be writing another poem after THAT one!! : ) I like all your poems.... xoxo -Mark

[InsanityWriter]

I'll see if I can check it out. ;)

[Patrick Henry]

I'd skip it. I just saw it again after watching it 5 years ago. It looks fake. Silent Hill is awesome!! : ) xoxo -Mark

[InsanityWriter]

Okay. :)

[Rafael4OWG]

I love Silent Hill, the game and of course your poem. Thanks for yourfeed back by the way.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading! ^_^

[Frieda P]

I don't know of Silent Hill but this is well written and wicked good.

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading. ^_^ It's a great movie, watch it! (;

[quinfinn]

the movie is creepy and will scare your pants off...wanna watch it with me?

[quinfinn]

i love this movie, and now.....i love this poem! you have taken the gist of the movie and given it silent wings. well done....

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;) I'm glad you liked it!! :]

[quinfinn]

welcome!

[Olivia Marie]

Silent Hill is one of the best movies ever created!!! SOO I love this!!! Excellent :)

[InsanityWriter]

^_^ Good to know in not the only person who's seen it. (: I want to see Revelation when I can... Thank you for reading!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Rayne-Alexandria]

Wicked fits so well. Swear I'm not stalking you!

[InsanityWriter]

XD It's okay... I'm not stalking you either... I just like your work! ;)