Silent Hill

Based off of 'Silent Hill.'

The falling ash

Silent Hill
The siren sounds
And blood does spill.
Take refuge with one evil
Who shall try to burn you, or
Keep outside with another
Who will hunt, and find, and kill.
Blood weeps the walls,
Again the wailing calls.
Monsters, screams,
Hellish beings
Roam about this town.
To where is that small child
Running around?

Author's Note

I'm not too big on video games, so this is based on the movie. :) If any of you have ever never watched 'Silent Hill,' do it. The suspense is excellent, as are the special effects. ^_^

If you don't like horror though... Don't.

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

A haunting theme and beautifully written.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading!! (:

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Frieda P]

Someone sent me an RR for this, I'll tell you I still like it, now I read it twice, it's really good ;-)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Courtney]

I really love this one! It's a cool concept and based well off of the movie/game :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading!! :D

[KAOlmsted]

I never saw it...doesn't sound much like anything I might be interested in, if this piece is anything to go by...that's not to say I don't like the piece, i do; just not a big fan of the content ;-) Thanks for sharing this.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. (: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[quinfinn]

revisited....still enamored with this one!

[InsanityWriter]

XD I'm very glad you like it. ^_^

[Nick.B]

Interesting poem, you manage to describe it really well according to the games and movies...great job...love your style

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks. (: I'm glad you liked it. :]

[Seanh12]

Silent Hill video games are great you should play them. The films are really good. I love this poem is this great. I love horror and the suspense is excellent in both the films. I love the films and games. This is what Silent Hill good job on this poem. This poem was simply easy to follow and flowed nicely i love it.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading! I'm happy you liked my poem. ^_^ I'm not really a gamer, but movies and books are definitely my kind of things. ;)

[Seanh12]

fair enough and its ok anytime xox

[A Girl]

I think it should say "Blood sweeps the walls". It sounds more dramatic.

Other than that great job! It flowed nicely; it was short and sweet.

I haven't watched the movie yet, but I will most definitely do that! :)

[InsanityWriter]

Do it!! And I purposely put 'weeps' because it's the best way I could describe it... 'Sweeps' doesn't quite fit. Thank you for the suggestion though! I love feedback. ^_^ Thank you so much for reading. (: