Lonely Road

Upon a lonely way you walk
With heavy feet you trod
Longing for a life you never had.

Author's Note

Enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Redboy]

short , sweet, wonderfull! (make it longer next time though )

[InsanityWriter]

XD I've found I writ a lot of short poems. ;) It bugs me a little that I can't seem to write longer ones, but shorter poems can have a bigger emphasis and don't bore or eat away at the reader's time. Long poems are good too, I'll let ypu know if I post any. ;)

[Mockingbird]

it sucks that at the end of your life you have regrets about not having done the things you wanted to do. this is a great lesson.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you again for reading. :) I'm glad you liked it!!

[llala]

short, powerful & sweet. I love it :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. :) I'm glad you like it. ^_^

[Death Girl]

Love it!

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you! :)

[hundi]

very nice short, powerful words

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for your review. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it! (:

[RachelReaper]

aint that the truth... well, sometimes. The last line, sometimes, at least. For only three lines you made this powerful, something everything can relate to (even if everyone doesn't want to admit it);.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. :)

[The dark story]

it's truly amazing how few words can be so meaningful and unfolds the truth of our life...it's a nice haiku...well done!!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading. ^_^

[The dark story]

Your most welcome!!

[Tracey C.]

Well Said!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks. ^_^

[Tracey C.]

Welcomes ^_^

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Short and sweet and sad...

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reviewing!