Huddled in a Corner

Huddled in a corner,
She is screaming inside her mind.
As hand reaches towards her
She whithers and was gone.

All became then silence,
No traces or remains
Were ever found,
Not even a single tear stain.

But if you can hear the echoes past,
And you come accross her house,
Come inside at midnight
To hear her dying sounds.

Reviews

[dunnia]

wow this captures both fear and sorrow...very much liked it

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you very much. ^_^ have a lovely day! :)

[Faffy]

this a wonderful poem ans i love your twist at the end it was fantastic. the horror and then sadness and then more horror was great =P loved it

great job!

-Roshan

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for your review!! ^_^

[Aysia]

I really like this one. I like the haunting mood of it. Good job >.

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks. :) I hope you have an excellent day! ^_^