Goodbye...

To say goodbye is so hard, yet to remember is the hold that keeps us locked forever..

In dreams you lay
Across oceans of magical stardust
Sprinkled gently upon my form
You lay deep within
To hold you,
oh how sweet the feel
Yet distant the dream
For above you lay
Looking down with tears that fall softly
Can you feel my pain?
I wonder..
And I ask myself
Why?
Gently they whisper
The sounds like the softest wind
Touching my face
Drying my tears
Brilliant stars
Oh the beauty!
I close my eyes
My form holding onto the world
I once knew
The light of your love
Still remaining inside
And it soothes me
Gently rocking me to the distant lands
Of new-born wonder and precious hopes
Of what was, yet can never be again.

And I weep..

My eyes close and I dream
As I hold onto the world of distant memory
Of your shining light
Distant yet still so near..

Whispering softly to the breeze
Goodbye my love..

Goodbye...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. No goodbye is easy. We need to be kind as possible and hold on to the good memories. A sad tale in a outstanding poem.
Coyote

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you make everything sound so beautiful..your touch is exquisite..

[Tate Morgan]

A touching memory of a decent and true man. He did as he felt he was called to.Personally I think he wanted to ease your pain and be remembered fondly

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh such a beautiful poem for having such sorrow, really soft flowing and full of emotions.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Stunning, hard hitting you have made a poem in which the sorrow is not only shown it is palatable onec again mon amie you jhave topped yourself and shown that no matter the challange you have risen to it, no more than that you have risen above it

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

First of all, I loved the photo. Secondly, the poem was great as well. Very well written and interesting to read. I'd love to read more from you!

[lochinvar]

the depth of the sorrow
and of love-lost, has been depicted
in beautiful, yet simple words...

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Absolutely beautiful. I felt the smiles, the tears and the longing.

[Poetic Beauty]

My friend this is deeply sorrowful and it has the yearning that can't quite be described. that void in your life that can't be replaced yet and yet you can't quite move on. It is beautifully done with such love and devotion. I true tribute to the that wonderful person who brought you times of great happiness and moments that will forever be cherished. I love the picture you choice to go with this poem. the words are magical as I am sure this love was and still is. Hugging you from a distance in hopes that you see brighter days soon.

[Marie Harrison]

Oh the emotions are so strong in this write
I can tell you are truly grieving in this poem
Sorry about your loss
But your poem is beautiful