And oh so softly

Love makes the heart beat faster..

His passion makes her swoon in a liquid pool at his feet
His touch... Oh to feel it brings the earth crashing down
Lightning darts throughout her body coursing through veins.

The voice of an angel speaks softly in her ear

And she sighs...

 

Heart beats rapidly..

Breath steams the very mirror of her soul

Soft whispers she grasps

With shaking fingertips

Touching them to her lips

Of parted wonder.

 

Colors swirl around her

Capturing her senses

Making them scream for mercy

And he gently smiles

Brilliant as the morning sun,

She basks in his glory

Holding close all he is.

 

Then slowly she slips away 

Letting his touch move her

His arms soft,

Yet with strength like none other

Taking her towards heaven

Then spiraling quickly

Towards hell

And she sighs.

 

Lips of passion spent now kiss

Softly, into the darkness of night

Sharing each others souls

Dreams

Love...

 

And oh so softly...

 

They sigh..

 ~~~~

His passion makes her swoon in a liquid pool at his feet

 

 

Reviews

[Ghost]

Steamy hot passion.. Usually I am the one who does the melting, but I am the melted puddle after reading this piece.. Keep them coming.. Nicely written poem thanks for sharing

[Linear]

Love drips, drops then stops at the very edge or tip of your pens imagination, once again bravo :0)

[Kat Collins]

Sensual and romantic...a rare feat! The power of a voice - can make you fall in love just by the whispers....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You just proved that someone can be romantic and naughty at the same time. So nice to see new words from you.

[Rossen]

A storm of sensual rapture~

[Morning Star]

sheer explosive sensual passion! completely absorbing
expression of the fire within lovers a climatic symphony
that sets the readers on fire! loved this poem!

Outstanding xxx Yolie

[Coyote Poetry]

Sweet words of desire and passion. I like the gentle pace and the desired end in the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

such passion you write with Mags...one can see there is depth that is awaiting inside you to scream her sensuality till it hurts the minds with exoticness and climatic satisfaction...

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Gosh ...you really known how to set the lights of love burning..your words and simply stunning

[emmajoy]

Passion, desire, love .. all mixed together to heat the imagination. Great phrases, great meaning .. defintely your forte .. ' .. Capturing her senses ~ Making them scream for mercy ~ And he gently smiles ' .. can see that, though shouldn't!