Who are you?

Love .... Sometimes we become different people in the name of it.

Who are you?

 

Who are you?
This man of smooth words falling upon my ears
Of wanton thoughts passing through me
Ahhh, they leave me breathless
Speechless, in a void of null
All closing in on me
For no where to go,
except forward
Towards your light
Your touch lingers
In my thoughts.
And I gasp with pleasure
Such sweet agony.
It should be painful, no?
Yet I laugh
For it isn't.
Instead I bask in all you give
Heart on my sleeve,
It seems my pride disobeyed me.

Do I care?
Do I dare?

I chuckle, like a schoolgirl.

Blind, I trace your features
In my hands I hold a small touch of heaven
I am lost..
Take all, I say!
Yet leave behind a small piece
To last me through the cold winter
That shall be what was once known, as my heart.

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

This is soft, beautiful and I could feel the emotion...you nailed this...I agree with Robin when it comes to love...it is so easy to lose ourselves when in that dreamy state....gorgeous piece of writing...

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a sad tale you have spun. It starts out loving and sensual in nature and then leaves you with only those long ago memories. You have done well conveying this thought.

[Antonio Valentino]

I could have that written for me, and die a happy man.

Just so wonderful, really.

Antonio :)

[Art Sun]

we become who we are because we yearn for new beginnings or the need to feel, know, or just wish to have a bit of passion upon us...and all we ask is to be left that small portion of our true selves...this is nice work Mags...

[The Analog Kid]

So smoothly explains our inhibitions, right? So sweetly describing it all.

[SpokenWord]

:) It is good to see how a man can affect a woman and how she responds to him with feelings of being lost within him. Ahhhh is what I said after reading this but Ahhh isn't a good review to give, LOL. Though you know what I mean. At least he left your heart safe with you for the winter months. :) It seems someone has been smitten ... hehehee

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This could be a love poem in reply to a great poet, an admirer of his words and the passion felt. If only this had been written around the time of Lord Byron. Beautiful poem my friend.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This INHO is what all lovers long to hear this is words that lovers would say to each other This is a poem that has affected this reader in such a wayn as to leave him speechless this is what true love strives to be or to become!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Lovely Magadelena- Like Robin says, it is love- we do crazy things for love sometimes.
I like this poem .. very nice Magdelena...

Chloe

[Robin]

"Do I care?
Do I dare?"

of course not , it is love , and how easy it is to lose ourselves within the glow ~