Fools rush in

Fools rush in

A Poem by Magdelena
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Death needs no invitation..

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  Through darkness yee shall find thee,
  Alone with thyself
  A beast among all; though others still doubt.
  I come in fear; for many I shall take
  On this here day; and throughout for all's wake.

  Alone I wander; my eyes cold as the night
  Fearing no one; not the darkness: nor the light!
  Snarling with fang-like teeth, do I bare,
  For those that surround me;
                           shall scatter if they dare.
I am one: I am many
For disguise I do hide
Withered in costume
Of ungodly pride.

So fear me; if you can
Come to me, if you wish
Let me coddle your form
Eat your bones on thy dish.

Laughter rings forth,
Forgive?
No doubt!
For who shall I conquer?
'Tis the only question that sounds out.

For I call out to the hungry;
the deprived: lonely: the mere man
My shadow of darkness
Blending in with the sand.

Hear my sound of nails as they scratch upon the street
Watch with eyes;
for I shall not forever keep.
Through windowless glass;
I pass by as shadow
My cloak-like figure;
invisible: black as the night air
Laughter rings forth
'You have nothing to fear'.

'Come to me', I call out;
'Come to me; those who dare'!

Screech my words on painted lips with hatred
For forsaken am I;
to thy bowls down below
No man shall trespass
No man shall ever go.

Sneak?
Oh I do!
Watch with blackened eyes;
I shall!

Preying on the helpless;
is what I do best
The greedy; the liars:
the cheaters and thieves
I promise sweet passion
Everlasting release.

Then I laugh..
Oh you poor, poor ignorant children
You disgust me,
make my skin crawl with vile
Fools rush in;
are nothing more than a child.

I will surround thee this here night:
and take what is rightfully mine
For an eternity I have waited;
And finally now is my time.

So scatter little children
Run if you can
Hide behind doorways
Pray for thee mere man.

To the depths of forgiveness;
if only thee knew how
Eyes all around
Eyes in back
I turn not to those;
for cowards as a matter of fact!

No....
I quiver in delight, searching as I do
For ones that are pure
With heart open and new.
The rest I toss aside'
too much a chore
For a fight I delight
That and nothing more.

I chuckle at their fear
I smile at their pain
I care not for thy suffering;
for I have done same!

I spread out my wings;
soon do take flight
For fools that rush in;
Ahhhh..

Are for my taking this here night! 







© 2011 Donna R Tivoli

© 2011 Magdelena


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ooo a nice and dark write here Mags - haunting imagery wrapped around gothic words!! brilliantly written as always - I also like how it pans out - and twists through the parts!! nice! this is so menacing - "So scatter little children
Run if you can
Hide behind doorways
Pray for thee mere man."

Posted 13 Years Ago


great job on this piece ... like the darkness in this one alot ... always a pleasure to read your writes :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



Intricate weave, with old English lending a gothic flair. Crisp lines, defining in a surprising way the mind of this friend, this foe, this unpredictable one.

Nice work...dramatic throughout.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A fool never sees what lies in wait, hidden in the dark. Enjoyed this dark write my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Dark, haunting, eerie, chilling - wow !

Posted 13 Years Ago


Darkly chilling and full of lethal menace. I love this, its brilliant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow very ominous and eerie... very different from you... excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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aside from your usual romantic theme..I loved this so much..a delicious darkness has befallen you and you do it with such aplomb..brilliant

Posted 13 Years Ago


You are to good at this...death is a realistic part of life ...we just don't know when it becomes our turn...

nice...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Superb ending to this piece. I like the tone and pace of this. it flows well. very intriguing...nicely done...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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