No Muse?
A Poem by
Magdelena
When thoughts go DUH!!!!! 'Brain-Dead!!
No Muse?
Oh No!
Pacing
Heart
Racing!
Panic
Stricken
I am!
Lord
WTF!!!!
Is
Happening?
Crap
And
All
That.
Like
What
To
Do?
Well
Lookie
Here
What
Is
This?
Hell!
I
Have
No
Friggen
Clue!
But
Mind's
A-racin
Feelings
Wastin.
And
Lord
Knows
Gotta
Get
Those
Feelings
Through!
I think I'll
Grab
A Song,
Turn
It on.
Close
The
Lights
If it
Takes
All
Night.
Sit
And
Stare
Into
Mid-Air.
Wine'
Will
Do
No
Clue
But
Hits
The
Spot.
Drunken
Stupor
Midnight
Duper.
Damn
Oh
Damn
No Muse.
Oh no!
What
A
F'N
Pooper!!
© 2011 Magdelena
Author's Note
I put this in horror... For nothing in me brain, oh the pain!!!!
Reviews
well said felt every word letter gasp!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think it is clever and humorous and I think your muse will return shortly.. bathroom break most likely!
The format gives the read of this the feel of frantic urgency-
Chloe
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think it is clever and humorous and I think your muse will return shortly.. bathroom break most likely!
The format gives the read of this the feel of frantic urgency-
Chloe
very interesting piece ... liked it alot ..great job on this!
Posted 13 Years Ago
very interesting piece ... liked it alot ..great job on this!
I'm feeling you hun...I am feeling you on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I'm feeling you hun...I am feeling you on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL.. sorry but I am the one who borrowed your MUSE! I will send her back sometime next week :) This one was funny enjoyed it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
LOL.. sorry but I am the one who borrowed your MUSE! I will send her back sometime next week :) This one was funny enjoyed it!
hahaha!! this made me laugh! it's so true - whenever I finish one poem I always thing right - no idea what the hell I'll right next, damn, then the panic haha then trying to get an idea - music - hunting for a muse or inspiration! oh this is so true indeed! nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
hahaha!! this made me laugh! it's so true - whenever I finish one poem I always thing right - no idea what the hell I'll right next, damn, then the panic haha then trying to get an idea - music - hunting for a muse or inspiration! oh this is so true indeed! nice!
this made me chuckle...love the wine part...oh and the music too...try to entice the muse...this was a fun read...
Posted 13 Years Ago
this made me chuckle...love the wine part...oh and the music too...try to entice the muse...this was a fun read...
We4ll this is facinating your writes as usual send me to a place I die for!
Posted 13 Years Ago
We4ll this is facinating your writes as usual send me to a place I die for!
Love it .. maybe museless but fantastically a-muse-ing ! Flow, girl, flow!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love it .. maybe museless but fantastically a-muse-ing ! Flow, girl, flow!
Oh no....muse has taken some time off to play! Cute way to tackle lack of new thoughts.....creative!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh no....muse has taken some time off to play! Cute way to tackle lack of new thoughts.....creative!
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Added on March 4, 2011
Last Updated on March 4, 2011
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Magdelena Charlotte, NC
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