Head clear. Cobb webs gone.

Finally finding freedom can be so fab!

Head clear. Cobb webs gone..
Fantasy world has finally disappeared
Funny how the mind will fall
Victim to the words and sing-song say

Well a new dawn has risen and I see all so clear
The words of the piper I finally shall deal
Behind glasses of amber, light so dim
I see into the soul and know the mighty will win.
 
lies, like walls of steel
No more pretense, for I won't fall
Had the best, like all the rest
Clawed my way to the top, for heard the call

Head clear. Cobb webs gone..

To a brand new start I'm heading..Pretense finally gone
For words on dust shall soon blow away
Along with the hidden meaning's that had nothing to say
So moving on by to my better days

For up ahead is that path that now lays..

My dreams I keep, just for private use
No sharing allowed unless I give permission too
So pen in hand, heart now wiser
I sit and write words the are truth just so

For all who fallen victim to the very same
Here to tell ya not in that game
So dustin of my britches
Fixen my brand new heart

So that together again

We can walk towards our brand new start
Up ahead I can see the sun shining
It's ray so bright and clear
It's magnet seems to draw me

So ever near..

 Head clear. Cobb webs now gone..

Funny how one doesn't' see that shinning light in the dark
Maybe because we want it to be so.. Or just are lost
Instead we listen to what lies are told
And in the morning look at them with dread and remorse

For once again the mighty has fallen to the whispers of fools.

So here I stand.. Finally to see
The new me has risen
  finally..

For Head clear. Cobb webs now gone..

Nevermore a victim to that ole-sing-song..

Reviews

[robyn.alexandra]

The flow of this is fabulous.
As I read I feel the smoke clearing and the perfect clarity descending. I can relate to this, the rebirth of self, the fresh beginning free from the past and the shackles you were weighted with. A stunning piece!

[Ladysue]

This is a song alright...it read and flows so lyrically...I love the message it carries. this is so well crafted..to perfection...really. you have fantastic phrasing in this....magnificently done...this is one for my favorites...

[Patches I'm not so new..]

A song of freedom! yes this is that, some new vista has opened as burden is lifted
"I can see clearly now , the rain is gone" Oh Twinie this is great wonderful news I'm happy so happy for you as to the poem itself lyrical something I really haven't seen by you in a great while I really liked the flow of this but it is the light and happy song that really made me enjoy this.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Absolutely breath taking I really loved this poem the lyrical feel throughout and the vision of a phoenix rising from such depressing embers floods my mind

great vocabulary and structure to this poem this is going straight into my favourites

I really enjoyed reading about your re-birth I can't wait for more of your poetry thank you for sharing such amazing writes

100/100 I would love to give you more but the max will have to suffice