Under the moons loving gravity's pull.

With love one can escape

 

Dance with me my love
Under the moons soft glow
Swing me in your arms
Please my darling, never let me go.

For alone we shall glide
To the sweet sound of soft guitars
  With your arms holding me close
Under the glitter of the stars.

In a world that is ours alone
We shall float on soft downy cloud
Safe in the knowledge
That it is love we finally found.

Then a kiss so sweet we shall pass
On lips tender and full
For forever we shall remain
Under the moons loving gravity's pull.

So dance with me my love
Hold me close in your tender arms
Make me feel your passion
Embrace me softly with your charms.

And atop a soft cloud we both shall remain
Dancing close with love so true
Beneath the stars softly shining
Under the moons loving gravity's pull.

 

 

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

I am in awe this is my twinie this is how she writes all the passion is present all the soft tender love that is expressed is expressed gently yet the ending is clear without crass vulgar wording this is your trueself coming forward and expressing thought of love as they should be expressed Wonderful my twin absolutly breathtaking!

[Ladysue]

this flows so smoothly with fluid emotion. this is utterly beautiful.

Dancing close with love so true
Beneath the stars softly shining
Under the moons loving gravity's pull

Just gorgeous!!!

[Cynthia]

such a soft lovely sweet poem! Its such a sweet nice flowing song! Your presentation, including the lovely poem, picture, font. It makes readers fall into your poem for how beautiful and sweet it is!

Lovely, beautiful, sweet poem, so as the picture :)
Amazing Job!
:D