Sweet Nothings...

Happy Valentines day all!!!!!

 

Darlin come on over and sit a spell

What's that? Oh you have nothing to say?

Well come on over here lover, anyway...

In fact we don't need any darn ole words

Know what I mean? In fact they just get in the way

Just you being near me, is enough for this ole gal

For sweet dreams you conquer like none other before

And the smell of your scent? Oh my!!!! I do so adore!

I could just die! I move a little closer, then inhale and sigh 

Ahhh Heaven! I'm floatin away on a summery cloud

Ssssh, let me be. I don't want to come back now.

 

Then you touch my hand... I Yi Yi...

 

Whoa! Lightening bolts up and down, then once again

They do start.. Honey you better watch it,

Or my heart may give out! And then you smile and whisper

In my ear.. Oh my, Zip.. Zap..it's like heaven on wheels!

Oh yea, keep on whispering those sweet words of appeal

For nothing finer, than molasses for sure.. You words

Of wonder.. Why they can open up any of my doors!

For they are, Hmmmm, that's right.. ["Sweet nothings."].

 

 

Oh yea..["Sweet nothings."]

And man oh man, they sure do make me squeal..

 

 

'Ahh  A Dum Dum a diddly Dum That's right!!!'

 

 

["My baby whispers in my ear..."]
Hmmmmmm Hmmmmmmm...

 

 

Ahh  A Dum Dum a diddly Dum That's right!!!'

 

Put a fork in me.. I'm done!!!

Ooooh La La!!

Ahh  A Dum Dum a diddly Dum That's right!!!'

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

1943/homer-kissing-marge-in-bed- By thesoftparade_1943

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

What a steamy poem in a funny's enclosure. I have never read these two elements blended together in a single work. I knew you wrote well on the romantic front but the comic timing's impeccable. Feels like a cuddly wuddly song towards the end..Kind of a humpy feel to it.

[OT]

ha this made me smile!! very fitting for the day! it's a fun write and we can tell you had fun writing it too which makes it an even better read!! nice!

[Ladysue]

well, this put a smile on my face... this does read like a song...great rhythm and a delight to read..good work.

[Rossen]

You are such a glowing delight... now I see why.
good stuff!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This is a very light and approprate for this day really a sweet little nothing I enjoyed this write me Gumba.
As I said long ago I promised to answer your writes and I always keep my word to the best of my ability. But then your writes are always IMHO at least, worth the read and a promise made is a promise to be kept. Don't you agree?

[Art Sun]

your poem could be the words to this chosen song...nice flow and rythym to this very nice creation...

[Sean M. Addams]

very cute and fun write ..enjoyed this alot and liked the music too... nice job on this