They were lost..

The feelings of two souls searching for love, and finally finding it.

 

 

She met him on a warm summer night

The breeze soft, like a baby's breath

Touching her sweaty skin, cooling it

She watched him walking. His clothes clinging

To his form as he walked over to her, breath

held, she watched him move slowly her way

Till finally he stood in front of where she sat

The stars shone above, the rays of the moon

Glowing softly against the night sky. Teasing

Her senses till all she could feel was magic

Pure, divine, magic! Breath held. It was then she knew.

 

She was lost!

 

Seeing her sit on the porch, the rocker moving

Back and forth, he watched her closely as he made 

His way to where she sat. He was mesmerized

At the vision before his eyes. The dark night lit up

Stars blinking down. The Moon staring down on them

Made him know this was meant to be. He was drawn

To her. Her scent sweet in the night air. Intoxicating

His very senses. Moving slowly, he waited till he was

Just upon her before he looked up. A small gasp sounded

Out in the night air. He stared into her eyes. Black as coal

So black that they were lost in the night. It was then he knew.

 

He was lost!

~~~~
The stars shone down on two lovers
Twinkling their brightness
Dazzling the eyes
And the fragrance..

Oh the fragrance!

Enchanting to the senses
Intoxicating to all around
In each others arms they sealed fate
That they had searched for, for so long
Memories of what once was, now gone
Dreams of the tomorrows, now coming to be
And they sighed,
Lovingly
Happily
And oh so peacefully..

For they were lost.

  In each other..

Author's Note

Song. "Going home' Kenny G


Red mountain picture owned by John @ gemstoneartist_amajor.wordpress._tucson-sunset

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. You really put together a beautiful story here.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

What a beautiful story to fit the poem, and the music was beautiful as well! It fit perfectly along with this...Great job~

[The Analog Kid]

Very romantic. You wrote it like a beautiful story:)

[Rossen]

This stands out from the fray, so many love enconters, feeling a little jaded
This is pure simple clear and focused, lovely read and writing.
Rossen

[Valentine]

Moonie..you are one sexy writer..if you don't watch what you are putting on here..my computer is going to start to steam ........love you ...Kathie

[Calypso]

Very romantic. You were able to describe the love between two people very well.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sigh!!! this was so wonderful, and the music set the right mood to this romantic poem! Loved It!!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Beautiful just that Twinie beautiful I felt the calm and the excitment building --- By the Eternal you are one hell of a poet and a gem in the many gemed crown of poetry and now is your time to shine!

[KAREN]

Beautiful write! The first words just suck you in and your there all the way to the end! Awesome work!

[Robin]

poetry to sink into , beautiful writing that has me reminiscing ..