They were lost..

The feelings of two souls searching for love, and finally finding it.

 

 

She met him on a warm summer night

The breeze soft, like a baby's breath

Touching her sweaty skin, cooling it

She watched him walking. His clothes clinging

To his form as he walked over to her, breath

held, she watched him move slowly her way

Till finally he stood in front of where she sat

The stars shone above, the rays of the moon

Glowing softly against the night sky. Teasing

Her senses till all she could feel was magic

Pure, divine, magic! Breath held. It was then she knew.

 

She was lost!

 

Seeing her sit on the porch, the rocker moving

Back and forth, he watched her closely as he made 

His way to where she sat. He was mesmerized

At the vision before his eyes. The dark night lit up

Stars blinking down. The Moon staring down on them

Made him know this was meant to be. He was drawn

To her. Her scent sweet in the night air. Intoxicating

His very senses. Moving slowly, he waited till he was

Just upon her before he looked up. A small gasp sounded

Out in the night air. He stared into her eyes. Black as coal

So black that they were lost in the night. It was then he knew.

 

He was lost!

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The stars shone down on two lovers
Twinkling their brightness
Dazzling the eyes
And the fragrance..

Oh the fragrance!

Enchanting to the senses
Intoxicating to all around
In each others arms they sealed fate
That they had searched for, for so long
Memories of what once was, now gone
Dreams of the tomorrows, now coming to be
And they sighed,
Lovingly
Happily
And oh so peacefully..

For they were lost.

  In each other..

Author's Note

Song. "Going home' Kenny G


Red mountain picture owned by John @ gemstoneartist_amajor.wordpress._tucson-sunset

Reviews

[~Death Is The Key~]

it's a very beautiful and wonderful piece.

[Arabdha]

the best thing about your writes is that you describe even the tiniest details so tactfully..the reader gets a complete picture..this is such a lovely romantic poem..couldn't help read and sigh over the lines..100/100 :)

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Love this poem very original idea and it carries the sweet tenderness of love from both parts its a great read thank you for sharing

100/100

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love drawing two souls together..sometimes you just know someone is right for you...

[Linear]

I was lost once, some bugger found me, always someone to ruin your day lol, lovely piece

[HorrorMaster]

Very beautiful I love it. :)

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful, tender, sweet and romantic. Fate brought them together as their love was truly meant to be. The wonder and discovery and joy in this piece was a delight.

[Cove Mitchell]

Human nature is so odd when you really think of all the strange things that begin to go on inside us in moments like this. Although my basis of comparison there is regular everyday life's mundane times. I like it :). Thanks for sharing.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Such a romantic you are, Magdelina.. two lost souls finding each other is a wondrous thing.
A poem written very well, so romantic... lovely.

Chloe