I love you

In my heart of all hearts, I say unto you

I love you.

 

Such simple words are they
Yet with more meaning than any other I shall ever say.

Thrilling, you once made me feel

Sunsets of meaning passed before my eyes

Moonlit nights, shown their rays upon my form

Then.. darkness..

 

So deep that blinded I became

Thrashing about, vines grasped within my thoughts

Holding tightfisted to all I posses

Releasing not a drop of sanity

Not an ounce for moment of rest.

 

My wondrous soul has for-passed all within
Now I am an open sore with no bandage;
to stop the flow of blood from seeping out.

I yearn for meaning to my pain
To answers only you can give
Like twine they hold bondage

My memories of you and I

To only set fire to all till they wither and die.

 

 

For my heart I gave, sent forth with trust

Yet you tossed aside

With not even a thought.

 

And I die.. Each second, each moment

For only emptiness stands instead

The vines that hold

Now gripping like steel.

To say I can go on

 

Oh such a lie
Falsity in itself for only my pride

To wander beneath myself
All unholy that is waiting for my mistakes.

 

Yet none I can make,  for they left along with my heart.

 

 

Nightfall has come upon me

I sit and stare

Yet you are not there.

 

Only the darkness reaches for me

To take hold once again

Of all I dream, of memories once shared.

 

Yet before it claims, I send forth my whisper

To hell with pride

For let me be the sinner. 

 

My darling...

 

I love you...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

What a sensational love poem. Very intense!

[Everett DeValle]

Sensational work...Wow. I like being spontaneous with my reviews not sounding contrived that I sound like some stuffy anal intellect over analyzing a poem...its simply beautiful. A lovely read.

[Holly]

beautiful poem, I love it

[Morning Star]

Beautiful love poem
your words captured many of the ups and downs of falling in love
also capture the pain and sadness
Deep emotions that goes on in relationships
grasped the reader( Me ) making the reader grasped the
essences of this brilliant piece
Love the flow and i love the entire poem
Outstanding Piece!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

"Yet before it claims, I send forth my whisper
To hell with pride
For let me be the sinner.

My darling...

I love you..."

Beautiful, Magdalena.. and we all sin ... and we can't help who we love.. even if we get hurt.

Chloe

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem of love. I like the kind and gentle emotion in your words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So emotional sad and very well written!

[KAREN]

The poem was well written with so much feeling and pain that I too felt it! Excellent job!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was intense heartbreak,
but still a beautiful work of art.
Another gem.

[Linear]

A love that proves not all things are meant to be, no matter how much we may love another we cant make anyone feel the same way, love can be a minefield for those who dare to rush in. A well expressed poem :)