Life..

Kind of like a story, yet not too long.. Hope all like it.

A warm breeze softly lifts my hair.

Kicking at the sand, I walk aimlessly.
Nothing on my mind; no thoughts...just freedom...
To be what I want. My arms held out, I fly...

laughing gleefully... Shamelessly, without a care.

For who am I but me?
Who knows what is inside but I?
Who cares to break that wall;
The curtain of many layers?

For, many years have made them.
Many words have strengthened them.
Many hurts have enforced them...
And many have given up, or pushed away.

The darkness of the sky is my shield;
The stars my shining light forward;
The breeze my soft caress, like a lovers sweet kiss...
Hands barley touching, gentle and lovingly.

I am freedom...
I am one with the world...
I am mother of all...
I am whole...I am me.

Waves crash against rock.
I watch and wonder on their anger...
To feel its force so powerful...
To unleash all within... the danger.

To the darkness of the night, I let out my call...
The call of the wild... the anger at the sea...
The anger held way too long within.
Like the rocks, I feel its sting... lashing.

Welts hidden, now healing; soothing...
The yesterdays slowly fade away...into the darkness.
The stars blink down on me and like a cloak...engulf.
Pain, misery, hurts, mistrust...all Leave.

I stand before the wind...hands held out as tears fall.
A moment of peace was all I sought; prayed for.
In return, I received my inner self...beauty in itself.
I gave myself to the darkness... the stars...the wind...the night.

In return, I was given a gift...


Life..

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life is an endless journey and we are continually molded by its influences...

For, many years have made them.
Many words have strengthened them.
Many hurts have enforced them...
And many have given up, or pushed away.

So very deep in meaning and rich in emotion... I can relate to your feelings expressed in this piece.

[HorrorMaster]

Life for me sucks, but I am sure your life is better. I like this poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is entirely theraputic. I loved the scenery and the deep thought.
The longing to be free was really special. Thanks for sharing these critical
thoughts. What a beauty.

[Linear]

You like so many here you write so very well, for straight from the drying ink of your tender heart your pen floats over the virginal white paper, injecting silky sublime words for your readers delight. your words are like you, beautiful and full of grace

[Chris38]

I felt in reading this transported up and into the sky and then gently coccooned while the words drifted by and tehn at the end gently let down to revel in the feeling that the poem gave me. Brilliant.

[Kelley]

I want to fly too....smiles
This was amazing Mags. I love the feeling
I get when I read it out loud.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Magdelena the Magnificent now where have I seen that phraise before?
As usual you have captured the essence of passion with this write once again!
Your poem is exquisite Maggie you have my full attenton when I read your writings The music you include is IMHO superfulous!

[Dream Weaver]

Exquisite passion for life painted with great imagery!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This poem is so wonderful.. you are who you are and proud to be.. it says to me .. the scars and heartaches that are endured make you who and what you are.
I like that you used the sea.. something about the seas that are so peaceful and healing.. a beautiful poem.

Chloe

[Tate Morgan]

AH the soul what can be said of it that wasnt said here.Are we so mysterious or are we just too complicated