If you could read my mind love.

If you could read my mind love.

A Poem by Magdelena
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Romance, love, passion. In the stars all things are possible

"
Eyes
 
 
I stare ahead, visions come forth swiftly
Of you my love.
 
Only you..
 
A soft sigh sounds out,
Gentle-like
As the wind softly passes my form.
 
Ahhh, yes.
 
Oh if you could read my mind,
My love.
 
Oh what you would see!
Visions so lovely.
 
Oh yes, my love,
For that they would truly be.
 
Of my form slowly moving by
Fingers trailing softly
Ever so gently
Down..
 
Towards your dreams deep within,
My love.
Of all your hidden desires,
That have lain so long, so deep inside. 
 
Towards all you possess,
My love.
Ever wanted, needed, dreamed.
For all is within you,
My love.
 
In your mind,
Thoughts,
Soul.
 
Till nothing is left but visions of just me.
 
And I look towards the heavens,
The stars so very bright
The moons soft glow staring down on me
And softly sigh..
 
For oh what a joyous sight.
 
And closing my eyes, I beg,
My love.
 
And softly blow a kiss towards the winds.
 
Yes......
 
Oh if you could only read my mind,
My love..
 
Only then would you truly see.
 
That I love you..
 
Oh yes my darling..
 
I love you... 
 
~~~
 
If you could read my mind,
My love..
 
 

© 2011 Magdelena


Author's Note

Magdelena

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Gorden Lightfoot. "If you could read my mind love"
Photo courtesy of Anna Cervova Title: Eyes

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This is lovely, Magdelena, filled with promise and warmth and desire and... well, love! I got all toasty inside reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah see you can dress up your work and set the mopiod it is beautiful;

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


Brilliant.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem Magedelina. So is the song.
It reminds me of a love who is not near.. so you blow kisses to the wind to carry to him.
So romantic!

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


hi,
this is really good. Kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can read your mind and I like what I see.......smiles
This was a great poem Mags and the song was perfect for the poem
I loved it thanks for sharing.
Kelley

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a tale my thoughts would tell. Gosh that was so beautiful, a perfect poem of one's true love, magnificent Magdelena.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

who wouldn't wish to read the mind of one who reaches to the very depths of the Soul...love is more than emotion...it is everything and anything that can capture...hold...and envelope the very mind...heart and Soul...

nicely written poem...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolute perfection! Gorgeous pic Incredible write and the
song choice amazing!!!! Bravo Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 23, 2011
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Tags: Love, Romance

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Magdelena

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