If you could read my mind love.

If you could read my mind love.

A Poem by Magdelena
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Romance, love, passion. In the stars all things are possible

"
Eyes
 
 
I stare ahead, visions come forth swiftly
Of you my love.
 
Only you..
 
A soft sigh sounds out,
Gentle-like
As the wind softly passes my form.
 
Ahhh, yes.
 
Oh if you could read my mind,
My love.
 
Oh what you would see!
Visions so lovely.
 
Oh yes, my love,
For that they would truly be.
 
Of my form slowly moving by
Fingers trailing softly
Ever so gently
Down..
 
Towards your dreams deep within,
My love.
Of all your hidden desires,
That have lain so long, so deep inside. 
 
Towards all you possess,
My love.
Ever wanted, needed, dreamed.
For all is within you,
My love.
 
In your mind,
Thoughts,
Soul.
 
Till nothing is left but visions of just me.
 
And I look towards the heavens,
The stars so very bright
The moons soft glow staring down on me
And softly sigh..
 
For oh what a joyous sight.
 
And closing my eyes, I beg,
My love.
 
And softly blow a kiss towards the winds.
 
Yes......
 
Oh if you could only read my mind,
My love..
 
Only then would you truly see.
 
That I love you..
 
Oh yes my darling..
 
I love you... 
 
~~~
 
If you could read my mind,
My love..
 
 

© 2011 Magdelena


Author's Note

Magdelena

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Gorden Lightfoot. "If you could read my mind love"
Photo courtesy of Anna Cervova Title: Eyes

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such very deep beauty in this piece, i really love this one a lot. this was extremely sweet and powerful, i always find such sensuality in your words and your poems.
"If you could read my mind,
My love.."
i love how you've put those verses right at the end on their own, this was awesome and strong, and great inspiration too!


Posted 13 Years Ago


the one thing that sets you apart is the raw passion with which you feel everything..and that reflects in your writing as well..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the song lyrics that line comes from..I like your soft romantic touch on the keyboard..lovely write..love you..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


An endearing littl eode to someone special.
Nicely painted

Posted 13 Years Ago


A amazing photo and words. Photo made the world come alive. When someone give you the look of being loved and safe. No better time in a life. I like the emotion and the desire in the words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very soft with short phases. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was incredibly beauitiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


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the queen of love poems strikes in the hearts of even the hardest...eloquent, passionate..and enchanting

Posted 13 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS!!!! The pic the song ur words it's soo beautiful. Really touched me. I let a woman go yrs ago (we was young) & over the past yr i've realized what i had, how different my life would b today & how the love we shared was so precious . I know now that she was the piece to make my heart whole, if only i opened my eyes back then. I do hope where ever she is she's happy. Thanx 4 turning me on 2 this song 2. Music is my life my relaxation & this is a great 1....Mikki

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful, soft, tender and very very romantic. And full of sweet promises, I think, too. Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2011
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Tags: Love, Romance

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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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