Look for the brightest one my dear..

just as the breeze gently passing, love can be as evasive..

Far away you stay hidden

Inside your own world

Of wonder, hopes and dreams

I look upon you in your light

Of deepest wonder and softly sigh

For what can the heart bring?

What can the thoughts say to make one hear?

A simple moment of light passes rare

For eyes to see, yet if blind.. It passes

Softly with the breeze, gentle like

And along with them are my tears of sorrow

For a love that is unnoticed, unseen by you

Like a sparkle, I pass, unto the darkest of nights

And my star shines down upon you, watching

Praying you safe, your dreams come true

Your moments of splendor, may they come forth

May your thoughts pass into the night, of all you so wish

For with love, I send forth, this one granted desire

For love has no price, just the sweetest of gifts to bare

Just know this my love..

 

Forever in the deepest of night,

I shall always be there...

 

Look above my love...

 

For my star shining down upon you?

Look for the brightest one my dear...  

 

Reviews

[Linear]

Gosh thats love, when somebody can give without recieving, and never expecting to thats a love that should be noticed, you write so well, this poem speaks on many levels, tl's beautiful

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You are the North Star!
Your heart is so easy to find.

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truly heavenly..it is comforting knowing that love transends our physicality...

[Dream Weaver]

True passion coming from within.
The heart is an amazing thing that
burns brighter then any star..
"Gorgeous" Mags xx

[Chris38]

This is a wonder of a work of love. The last two lines are amazing.

[Coyote Poetry]

"For love has no price, just the sweetest of gifts to bare
Just know this my love.."
A amazing poem of love. Kind of words we would speak to a sweet lover we are leaving for a time. The stars can be the reminders we are thinking of them. A perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Kelley]

I like the shape of this one Mags and the hint of a star shinning down on us.
the whole thing was kind of like a Christmas tree......smiles

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This is supurb Maggie you always touch my soul with your writes no matter the subject you sooth my soul.