Look for the brightest one my dear..

just as the breeze gently passing, love can be as evasive..

Far away you stay hidden

Inside your own world

Of wonder, hopes and dreams

I look upon you in your light

Of deepest wonder and softly sigh

For what can the heart bring?

What can the thoughts say to make one hear?

A simple moment of light passes rare

For eyes to see, yet if blind.. It passes

Softly with the breeze, gentle like

And along with them are my tears of sorrow

For a love that is unnoticed, unseen by you

Like a sparkle, I pass, unto the darkest of nights

And my star shines down upon you, watching

Praying you safe, your dreams come true

Your moments of splendor, may they come forth

May your thoughts pass into the night, of all you so wish

For with love, I send forth, this one granted desire

For love has no price, just the sweetest of gifts to bare

Just know this my love..

 

Forever in the deepest of night,

I shall always be there...

 

Look above my love...

 

For my star shining down upon you?

Look for the brightest one my dear...  

 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem! Such feelings and emotions so beautifully written!

[Tate Morgan]

The longing of a beautiful heart

[Desert Dreamer]

A beautiful image full of peaceful words of love.

[Fran Marie]

a lovely piece so beautifully expressed in poetic verse~nicely penned

[Calypso]

So full of love.
This poem makes me think.

[A]

" Look above my love...

For my star shining down upon you?
Look for the brightest one my dear... " I loved these lines
This is an impressive poem full of love, enjoyed it very much, thank you.

[Valentine]

A love of true depth coming to both parties is a rare commodity..only a few are fortunate enough to find love where it showers its blessings down on two people..and that is sad..love and God bless you sweetie..Kathie

[OT]

great sentiments here!! well written and nice imagery, it has a peaceful tone about it!!

[Art Sun]

nice work Mags...love is at times uncaring in its ways...and it is also very caring in its ways...we strive to be that shinning star to the eyes of our desire...and sometimes it just doesn't happen...and then at other times it envelopes us...such is love...

truly nice work...

[KAREN]

Peace is what I felt reading this! Love can bring you peace if you find the right person. Beautiful write!