I once again fall in love.

To turn back the hands of time. Oh how lovely that would be...

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The wind, soft as a feather, moves
Eyes closed, I inhale
The richness as it passes
My cheeks feel its soft caress
Like a lovers kiss, gently it touches
And I smile.

Raindrops start to fall slowly
Face upturned, I let the drops touch me
The smell intoxicating to my senses
It overtakes all of me, I indulge in its richness
The feeling exquisite, divine, and I grasp it close
Letting it overtake all of me deep within
And I gently sigh.

Oh the feeling of freedom
The purity of the breeze softly passing by
The feel of the rain as it touches my body
The wetness soaking me, lapping at my form
Like the arms of a lover that touches oh so gently
Eyes closed, Senses bare, I fall into its passion.

 

And gently float away...

 

Memories,

Of once upon a time

Passes my view

I inhale all its richness

For all still lies deeply within me.

 

Eyes closed, I feel the rain pour down on me

Oh the sweet joy.

The richness of splendor that comes forth

I bask in it

Holding my arms out

Towards all it offers.

 

For you are there my love.

 

Always..

 

Inside those sweet, sweet, raindrops.

Each one marking the memories from within

Bringing them forward yet once again

Yes...

 

For you are there my love...

Always..

Forever to hold deep inside
Within my heart, I savor each precious moment
Till it is time that I say goodbye.

Your touch of sweet to always linger.
Your scent deep within
Always still felt
Funny how time fades certain memories.

Yet with you, they seem to linger forever
Like the raindrops sweetly falling
The mist of pure that slowly trickles down my skin
And to this I say
Let them fall..

Yes my love...
Let them fall.
 

 And slowly,

Oh so slowly..

I once again fall in love.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the description of the closed doors opening up. A excellent poem of love and hope. A very good ending to a outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

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masterful romantic prose! You capture all those little things that make us come alive with we are in love

[Moflo]

This was a great write! Such great descriptions! I think it was so revealing and emotional as well. Great job.

[Marie Harrison]

Magnificent love write. You write these so well! Loved it Mags.

[SpokenWord]

Love should be as fluid as rain and it is just as romantic isn't it? This is a nice way of looking at love and like rain ends so does love at times. Still your poem had soft hints of sensual undertones that were stimulating during the read.

[Princess3Morag]

Oh so beautiful! :) It draws you in and makes you sense everything as if it were you...

[R J Askew]

Marvellously evocative. This love is perfect in its abstraction. The raindrops cld signify sadness, but equally they make you feel also and maybe it is better to feel, even sadness than not to feel. But the poem is not sad in any way.

[Art Sun]

very nice poem...each stanza has its creativeness...and you blend them each very well...with love like this how could one possibly lose...and yet it is ...sadly...a reality of life...oh to turn back those hands of time...

nice...

[Twilight]

If only! This is rather good, and I enjoyed reading it throughout! Although the main theme is not particularly original, the writer has expressed it very effectively! The wording is apt, and forms a tapestry for the reader's discernment. Overall, it seemed to have a more positive or uplifting tone, than the previous piece of Magdelena's (which I also reviewed). Indeed, romance can influence our lives in various ways, sometimes with sadness, but love is always there to be found - if we look hard enough...

[KAREN]

Loved each and every word of this! So beautiful and wonderfully expressed with great feeling!!