The wind, soft as a feather, moves Eyes closed, I inhale The richness as it passes My cheeks feel its soft caress Like a lovers kiss, gently it touches And I smile.
Raindrops start to fall slowly Face upturned, I let the drops touch me The smell intoxicating to my senses It overtakes all of me, I indulge in its richness The feeling exquisite, divine, and I grasp it close Letting it overtake all of me deep within And I gently sigh.
Oh the feeling of freedom The purity of the breeze softly passing by The feel of the rain as it touches my body The wetness soaking me, lapping at my form Like the arms of a lover that touches oh so gently Eyes closed, Senses bare, I fall into its passion.
And gently float away...
Memories,
Of once upon a time
Passes my view
I inhale all its richness
For all still lies deeply within me.
Eyes closed, I feel the rain pour down on me
Oh the sweet joy.
The richness of splendor that comes forth
I bask in it
Holding my arms out
Towards all it offers.
For you are there my love.
Always..
Inside those sweet, sweet, raindrops.
Each one marking the memories from within
Bringing them forward yet once again
Yes...
For you are there my love...
Always..
Forever to hold deep inside Within my heart, I savor each precious moment Till it is time that I say goodbye.
Your touch of sweet to always linger. Your scent deep within Always still felt Funny how time fades certain memories.
Yet with you, they seem to linger forever Like the raindrops sweetly falling The mist of pure that slowly trickles down my skin And to this I say Let them fall..
This was such an amazing poem!! It was soft, tender, and it was very rich!! There was a lot of imagery, and it just added to the whole poem!! The use of rain was just fabulous, for there is nothing better than the feel and smell of rain. It flowed magnificantly, and it was just beautiful. Absolutely lovey and fabulous. Beautiful job, absolutely beautiful.
Nothing quite so emotion enducing as a gentle rain; no harmful bites, or annoying nibbles, but the spreading of droplets, far outreaching their minutia. You've brought this metaphor to life with your poem. So real one might find the ending to be a moment too soon.
Indulging in the richness of love is divine indeed. It is so easy to fall in love with the same person over and over again and each time it deepens in strength, particularly if you are apart for any reason.
This is truly magical Mags, you have stretched out your arms and embraced the essence of true love...
*Tears* (Too close to home)
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what a soft and tender composition of love and alluring fondness.
What a perfect read for this howling wet night... I think the heavens read your words dear poetess, as they are playing them out where earth meets sky...
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