"Mi atrevida .. Te amo .."

"Te amo" ... "Mi atrevida .. Te amo .." Spanish "I love you" "My darling.. I love you"

In the darkness of the night I see him

Behind closed lids, I become lost.

Dreams become reality

Light shines within my soul and heart.

His scent, the feel of his skin

The sound of his voice..

Oh yes...

Oh how it moves me.

 

Intoxicates my senses.

To just hear it, makes me sigh

Deep inside, where dreams become reality

Where all I wish for, becomes my only truth.

 

Yes, in the darkness I see all

Feel all..

 

For there, he is with me

My hands reaching out to feel his soft touch

Hear his voice, smooth as silk.

 

And as the night descends its sweet escape

We are one,

Together.

As it should be.

 

~~

 

Yes.. In the darkness,

I escape.

He and I...  

 

My whispered words the only sound.

 

"I love you"... 

 

"Te amo" ...

 

"Mi atrevida .. Te amo .."

 

"My darling.. I  love you"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tony]

Alluring write-- "Yes, in the darkness I see all/ Feel all"-- like that special person heightens all our senses so we can see in the dark. That's pretty powerful.

[Poeticpiers]

A most enjoyable read presented in free form poetic prose

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very dreamy and romantic! Great poem

[Tina Kline]

How very romantic and tender. Shows how wonderful night can be with the right person. I really like this.

[Twilight]

A tender and romantic piece of writing, Magdelena. In this piece, I felt that the play of words was more powerful than what they actually describe. The way this has written, does express quite a warm and potentially real atmosphere of romance for the reader! The foreign language words might say what has already been said, "I love you". However, this was probably intended to double their impact on the reader, simply by repeating this phrase in another language. But, what do other readers think of thiese observations? Also, what will Magdelena write about next?

[R J Askew]

Inspiring read. I like the thought of such a powerful imaginagion. And THAT is exactly the sort of reader I want and exactly where I want my own dream creationgs to be, alive behind a million readers lids. That dreamreal is where we writers do out thang.

[Marie Harrison]

Oh, so sensual and romantic! Fleeting night thoughts. Love the music too! Wonderul as always, Mags. Hugs to you!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I feel like a vampire.
The poem makes me want to run away from the light.

[Kat24]

Hi,
this is really good. very interesting. Kat24

[OT]

this was sweet!! (also I need to learn how to get these music things in haha) - the music just flowed with the piece so well! it was also very bittersweet in a way - lots of layers here, unravelling each time I read it! strong provocative poem!!