"Mi atrevida .. Te amo .."

"Te amo" ... "Mi atrevida .. Te amo .." Spanish "I love you" "My darling.. I love you"

In the darkness of the night I see him

Behind closed lids, I become lost.

Dreams become reality

Light shines within my soul and heart.

His scent, the feel of his skin

The sound of his voice..

Oh yes...

Oh how it moves me.

 

Intoxicates my senses.

To just hear it, makes me sigh

Deep inside, where dreams become reality

Where all I wish for, becomes my only truth.

 

Yes, in the darkness I see all

Feel all..

 

For there, he is with me

My hands reaching out to feel his soft touch

Hear his voice, smooth as silk.

 

And as the night descends its sweet escape

We are one,

Together.

As it should be.

 

~~

 

Yes.. In the darkness,

I escape.

He and I...  

 

My whispered words the only sound.

 

"I love you"... 

 

"Te amo" ...

 

"Mi atrevida .. Te amo .."

 

"My darling.. I  love you"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Valentine]

WHOA best slow down sexy girl..this one was a bit steamy..I think I need a fan..lola nd God bless..Kathie

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oh the passion! Lost in dreams weaved into your reality..lovely

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hello .. what a beautiful, passionate poem .. love poems are my favorite..
The Spanish makes it even more romantic and sensuous.. lovely words.. beautiful.
Nice song to accompany the poem.

Chloe

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of love. I lived in the tropics for almost 4 years with the Army. The Spanish language can be sweet and make you crazy with desire and passion. I like the feel and the emotion of your poem. Love is the best days for young and old hearts. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ladysue]

A beautifully romantic write. I enjoyed this...lovely work...

[Tate Morgan]

so nice to see you feeling loved again

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful write~~ Very romantic and the song fits perfectly~ Reminds me of a 19th & 18th century poem~

[KAREN]

Lovely, Beautiful! And so ROMANTIC! Excellent job! Shelving this!

[Moflo]

Nice writing. I like how you blended the languages.

[Art Sun]

nice ... a very soft and flowing escape into the very core of creation through dreams and love...

nice song...one of my favorite Artist...