Whispered words

Whispered words

A Poem by Magdelena
"

Love can be so heavenly when it comes naturally

"


Whispered words

Spoken so softly

Tenderly

Like a butterfly gently moving across the recess of my mind

 

I close my eyes and listen to the soft winds

Gliding gracefully

I weep

Tears of utmost pain

 

For no other love has taken me under its spell

 

No other love has made me feel such magic

 

And no other love has made me feel like a woman

 

Natural and real

 

Loved and cherished

 

As you.

 

 

Whispered words....

 

Spoken so softly....

 

© 2011 Magdelena


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nice thoughts...nothing like being in love...to whisper or hear those whispered words of loving...

nice...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful words of love, and how that love should make one feel, and the song choice is excellent

Posted 13 Years Ago


Glorious words of love, to have someone who respects you and makes you feel like a woman in every sense of the word is magical...a whisper is all it takes.
:-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Whispers can be speak pretty loud can't they. Impressive write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What beautiful words .. and probably the ones everyone searches for.

No more to say than that except, thank you for sharing ..

(great song!)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very tender poem written superbly, very impressive!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


An elegant testament to the power of tenderness.

Indeed love is this subtle ineffable grace, and what we live for.

Thank you for this timely beauty on the brink of the new year.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, very impressive. I like the feel of this, someone feeling so very loved in a romantic and tender way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Now that poem would make any woman feel out of this world!! So beautifully written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sweet work.
Anyone who reads this will know how
it feels to be truly special.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 23, 2010
Last Updated on January 9, 2011
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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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