summer breeze

Just dreamin

A sweet summer breeze blew through my thoughts tonight

Taking me along its glory towards all before me

The scent filled the air all around me

Whispering its gentle words in my ear.

 

'Surrender', it softly said..

 

Arms spread wide, I felt its soft touch tingle

My body opening towards all it offered 

The softest of breeze filled the air

And I inhaled all its beauty

Its untold mystery.

 

Face to the darkest of nights

The stars of bright

I soon became,

That soft summer breeze.. 

  

 

 

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

You speak of summer yet it really feels like the openess of new possibilites, and surrendering to what is right around the corner....
Great to read you again!!
You've been missed:)
Kel

[Fran Marie]

'Surrender', it softly said..

A most enchanting piece ....beautifully expressed and well penned!!

[Valentine]

Nature at its best girl..I just wish we would get some rain..lol and God bless..Kathie

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I love the felling of being carried away by nature.

[Kelley]

Summer is almost gone but this is a great reminder
of the great things about summer.

Thanks for sharing a great poem
Kelley

[Dream Weaver]

A beautifully graceful journey through
thoughts charted and uncharted caught
up in this summer breeze...

[Coyote Poetry]

We shall miss those summer breezes. Fall is upon us. A beautiful and gentle poem. Nothing better the a warm day with a gentle summer breeze. A excellent poem.
Coyote