And I slowly die

Love has no face, except a mirror inside our hearts..

 

 

On moments of memory

I see you

I hear your voice, softly

Flowing by.

 

Oh, cómo me largo para ti

 

Oh my love.. Longed for your touch

Your lips

Soft upon mine

Like fine wine.

 

The taste intoxicating my senses

My heart

Soul

My very being.

 

I close my eyes against the pain

For your lips I shall never taste.

 

Your voice

Soft and inviting

Shall never pass by my ears.

 

And I die

Each moment.

Second.

 

That you are away..

 

Tears of pain fall gently

Upon the dried earth

The breeze that passes by

Tears that can not stop.

 

Forever

Till the end of time

I shall stand

Broken hearted.

 

And shed my heart

Softly to the winds

To all before me

My tears.

 

Mis lágrimas de dolor

 

Yes... My love..

 

My tears of pain.

 

And I slowly die....

 

 

Author's Note

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"Translation:"
Oh how I long for you...
(Oh, cómo me largo para ti)
My tears of pain
(Mis lágrimas de dolor)

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

This is beautiful and sad at the same time. Longing for someone that is out of reach must hurt a lot. Beautiful pen on this poem, great work.

[Wondering Mind]

For me, this flowed beautifully, sadly romantic and the Spanish lines were well placed.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. I like the Spanish. I told my children old heart ain't as hard and tough as you may think. Slow and easy does it. Lesson must be learn by the pain of mistake and lost love. I like the gentle tone and beautiful words of this poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Dream Weaver]

Tale bello scrive bene fatto.