Take me away......

Take me away......

A Poem by Magdelena
"

The sun, stars. A lone tropical island. Heaven....

"

 

Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas.
 
Let me feel the sun's soft rays gently touch my skin
Hear the sound of the water as it sounds out against the wind
Watch the blue color gleam from the brightness of the sun
Let me feel the exquisiteness of the surrounding beauty till the morning is done.
 
Then when the nighttime slowly ebbs across the sky
Let me close my eyes and feel the power of the moon
The soft light upon my form
Let me reveal in all it sends forth.
 
Hold me, my love
Never let me go.
 
And as we lay and watch the sun slowly descend
Let us listen to the sweet sounds of the waves
As they slowly move in and out across the sea
Hands held, let us reach out to grab at all its glory.
 
The sand our blanket
The sky and stars
Our cover.
 
My love
Never let this night be over.
 
Then as the night slowly moves all around us
The darkness filling the sky
We shall kiss softly and oh so sweetly
For alone shall be just you and I.
 
Yes my love...
 
Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas.
 
Come to me. Take me away to the soft tropical breeze of the whitest sands.
 
And let us become alive..



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Picture of Surreal Coastal Sunset Picture West Coast Vancouver Island


"Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas." (Spanish)
 
"Come to me. Take me away to the soft tropical breeze of the whitest sands." (English)


 

 
 
 

 
 
 
 

© 2011 Magdelena


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Hi,
This is a very good job on this piece of writing. kat24

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I'm very impressed with this piece ^^

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