Take me away......

The sun, stars. A lone tropical island. Heaven....

 

Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas.

 

Let me feel the sun's soft rays gently touch my skin

Hear the sound of the water as it sounds out against the wind

Watch the blue color gleam from the brightness of the sun

Let me feel the exquisiteness of the surrounding beauty till the morning is done.

 

Then when the nighttime slowly ebbs across the sky

Let me close my eyes and feel the power of the moon

The soft light upon my form

Let me reveal in all it sends forth.

 

Hold me, my love

Never let me go.

 

And as we lay and watch the sun slowly descend

Let us listen to the sweet sounds of the waves

As they slowly move in and out across the sea

Hands held, let us reach out to grab at all its glory.

 

The sand our blanket

The sky and stars

Our cover.

 

My love

Never let this night be over.

 

Then as the night slowly moves all around us

The darkness filling the sky

We shall kiss softly and oh so sweetly

For alone shall be just you and I.

 

Yes my love...

 

Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas.

 

Come to me. Take me away to the soft tropical breeze of the whitest sands.

 

And let us become alive..



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"Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas." (Spanish)

 

"Come to me. Take me away to the soft tropical breeze of the whitest sands." (English)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. Your words took me to a good place. I could use a long vacation by the sea with too much time to wander and play. I like the emotion and the very good ending to your poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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you really do these poems justice..just beautiful as you capture the very essence of love

[E.H. Monroe]

I always break a sweat when I read your poems. Like I'm peering in between the lines of a softcore porn, right before the action gets started. Its so full of REAL passion without the heinous push of filth.
The movemnets of the bodies reflect the movemnts of the ocean and the moona nd the sky which you capture perfectly.

Another great job from Ms. Magnum

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic and seductive, it all sounds like such a wonderful heaven on earth its breathtaking. Outstanding poem, I sure enjoyed reading this.

[Chris38]

A beautiful warm piece.

[Undying Glory]

this was very beautiful and deep work, i sure love this very sensual poem here. i love those Spanish verses as well, they sure are great! amazing write!

[KAREN]

Beautiful! Felt like I was there! Excellent job!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love it! what a breath-taking, romantic piece!

[Calypso]

The Spanish added something nice to this poem. So lovely.

[Nothing Personal]

Oh Beautiful..Oh so romantic..I love the idea..I wanna get lost in your poem ..And I love your collage of what I reckon is Spanish..Very vivid, exquisite in its content..