The time I let myself become one with the world..

The time I let myself become one with the world..

A Poem by Magdelena
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Sometimes little things mean so much..

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I dream of moments surpassing all others
floating like a breeze on a summers clear blue sky
I lie in my hammock
My arms over my head as I stare at the openness above.

I watch the clouds slowly move on pass
Lazy.. Is what I feel
No means to do anything at all

Listen to the sounds of the bees buzzing by
Inhale the smell of fresh cut grass
As it engulfs my senses.Eyes closed, I gently rock.
Moments pass.
Time has no meaning, nor do I have any cares.

When was the last time I had done this?
Let myself become one with the world?

I ponder, yet no answer..

Do I really need one?

No...

Softly I feel the breeze move my hair gently off my neck..
Like a lovers kiss, the feeling so exquisite
I sigh..
Peace has invaded my very soul!
My inner being that has been trapped for so long
I relish it!
Take it within and hug it to me.

I am alone with my thoughts of null
For none are as important as this
This no-where land of just peace and dreams.

Whether real.. Or not
No difference
For the mind can imagine all it wishes
Can put images where none have been before.

It can create love..
Peace..
Happiness..
Such joy!

This moment alone
This pleasure I adore.

This gift for myself
This moment surreal.


The time I let myself become one with the world.
 
 
 
Except just lie here and count the minutes as they pass.

© 2009 Magdelena


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Another peaceful bucolic scene you have have created here Maybe you have attend more "birthday parties"
because the last one seems to have done wonders for you I don't believe I've seen you this "relaxed" in a long long time. Kudos on the poem my Twin it reminds me of lying in ameadow blue sky green grass and watching Anabelle munching grass nearby Thanks for the memory

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his was bliss! i felt peaceful myself just imagining this, great work reakky, its beautifully serene

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Softly I feel the breeze move my hair gently off my neck..
Like a lovers kiss, the feeling so exquisite
I sigh..
Peace has invaded my very soul!
My inner being that has been trapped for so long
I relish it!
Take it within and hug it to me.

I so loved these lines here,
Another write I can relate to,
This is very well expressed and so well written.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely~
I know this feeling well. I have these moments all the time. Sometimes to the annoyance of passers-by or old men trying to mow their yards.
You captured that slowly swinging peaceful feeling so well~ Reminiscent of summer afternoons. That's a delight in this cold weather.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Another peaceful bucolic scene you have have created here Maybe you have attend more "birthday parties"
because the last one seems to have done wonders for you I don't believe I've seen you this "relaxed" in a long long time. Kudos on the poem my Twin it reminds me of lying in ameadow blue sky green grass and watching Anabelle munching grass nearby Thanks for the memory

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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