Dance with me

Dance with me

A Poem by Magdelena
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Oh the love of dance, such heated passion...

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Dance with me, he said
His eyes, like two sun kissed moonbeams
Held me in their control
His hand out, I put mine in his.

Tingling sensations shot threw me
I felt his touch like liquid fire
Trembling, my legs started to move
His body taking mine with ease.

We floated, he and I
Across the crowded room
People surrounding us
Yet it was only him I was in tune.

His touch, magical
Like sensations I've never felt
His aroma intoxicating, drugging my senses
Of desire ripping through my very form.

He held on tightly as the song started to change
Soon the sounds of the Salsa came,
and his body started to sway
The beat intensified, as did my heart.

Soon our feet went to the rhythm
Like we danced so many times this way
I felt like I had always known him
As our bodies began to sway.

Our feet moving faster, to this Latin beat
Our bodies sweating with passion
His fingers caressing my open back
Like tiny ripples of desire, my mind could not ration.

We moved in circles all around
The others stopped and stared
At the dancing couple I heard call out
The ones who danced with dare.

We looked like [Fred] and [Ginger]
Like two dancing stars
The Mambo next.. Then the Rumba
And soon I heard the roars.

As others started to clap and send forth their cheers
Like a daydream I was living
My feet flying off the floor
Magical it seemed.. And ooh.. So much more.

Then slowly all diminished, and lights stated to blink
Telling us the night was over, and all did start to leave
This Cinderella's ball was done
And the clock had done stroked twelve.

I sighed so very heavily as I headed for my coat
Then a hand so tenderly came and softly touched my skin
I looked up in surprise, and saw my Latin man again
He stared so very quietly, that all around grew dim.

Then softly he held out his hand
And once again I felt mine in his.

His eyes, like two sun kissed moonbeams
Held me in their control
Then softly he whispered those special words
And I knew then I had given him my soul.

Dance with me, he said
Just that, nothing more
My coat held out, then together we turned
And walked out the door.

© 2011 Magdelena


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Magdelena

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The dance of passion that may lead to the dance of fulfillment. Beuatiful piece full of imagery that sweeps the reader across the dance floor with this vibrant couple. With the club now closing, he invites her to come with him and create their own music and new dance. The very sensual side of dancing. Great work of the pen!

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We looked like [Fred] and [Ginger]
Like two dancing stars
The Mambo next.. Then the Rumba
And soon I heard the roars

`tripping the light fantastic` in a most romantic way, you bring

the ambience of old hollywood into play~a real elegant piece here

Mag~ delightful and enjoyable to read~ Loved it!!



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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Stop over for a drink and a yarn .I like the way you think


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2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You have a fantastic imagination and it is always expressed so well, It is like a live show...happening on my computer screen. This to me was the dance...leading to the BIG DANCE.

Tony

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful, so beuatiful
A most sincere and loving write here.
Love this write alot, wonderful flow to it as well.


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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The dance of passion that may lead to the dance of fulfillment. Beuatiful piece full of imagery that sweeps the reader across the dance floor with this vibrant couple. With the club now closing, he invites her to come with him and create their own music and new dance. The very sensual side of dancing. Great work of the pen!

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Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

aah anticapation I love this, leaves the reader to make up their own minds as to what will happen will they go for a cup of coffe and then part or shall a deeper relationship ensue? Yes this I like very much!
Save for the music LOSE IT!

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