For now they are falling on me...

For now they are falling on me...

A Poem by Magdelena
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Lifes many hardships caan bring forth such pain..

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I walk upon this place called earth
My steps laden with so much woe, strife.
Yes this is my life
So live it I must.

I look above
At the man who brought forth
All that I see, all that is me
For whatever it's worth.

I see the land start to fill, water falling
I trudge forward, intent on one thing
To get to the place I am meant for
To live out my one true dream.

I bend and run my fingers through the liquid mass
Then realize it is Luke-warm
Like tears I have shed on many a night
tears for all that has past and now gone.

Arms held high, I search the heavens
My heart breaking for what I see
For tears form the heavens are falling
And now they are falling on me.


Yes, I softly cry....


For now they are falling on me...

© 2009 Magdelena


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This I feel in my heart, in my soul this is a fimiliar theme to me for I have felt the rain you speak of many times . I can sympathize, I can empythise. Nay I cry with you my friend foe this reaches deep and causes memories and tears to flow!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on October 27, 2009

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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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Hello to all; Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so.. more..

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