"Streams Of Gold"

In the heart love stays with rays of hope..

 

 

A moment in time has passed me by
I sit by the edge of the stream.
My hair caressing my shoulders;
along with the sun beating its soft rays down upon me..

I bask in its glory
My face held towards the light
My eyes open slowly
I see all
Many things in my minds eye..

The beauty of the day
My hand softly touches the water.
The coolness caresses my fingertips
they tingle..

My thoughts move with the soft wind slowly passing me by..

Of him...
My one and only;
I think of...

Desire held in check for so long
Such dreams of surreal
I hold close to my chest.

Come to me;
I whisper softly
The words barely above a whisper

Yet
In my heart I feel them.

I feel all
His love for me shines like a beacon
I read his words to me in his letter
A smile softens my lips.

Dragon-flies pass me by
Their wings making a soft sound around my body.

But I sit.
My hand holding his letter in one
The other,
The droplets of pure clean water.

Like streams of gold;
they lay upon my hand
Like my love lays upon my breast.

In harmony
Together they both do rest.

 

Reviews

[deeps]

I feel all
His love for me shines like a beacon
I read his words to me in his letter
A smile softens my lips.

Dragon-flies pass me by
Their wings making a soft sound around my body.

Such lovely sentiments in this write here,
This is one beuatiful, loving and touching write you have penned.
Very lovely flow or words. I am enjoying reading your words tonight.

[Tate Morgan]

What a beautiful guilded thought Is it a memory or a dream ?
Tate

[Sean M. Addams]

your big on the sensual pieces lately... but i like them alot... you put alot of nice detail in them...very beautifully done... liked this alot!!!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Beautiful an Idyllic piece well done IMHO and very vivid a picture here created similar to days of yore of the time of Greek Gods of sayter, unicorns, Nymphs Pan Centaurs that is what this brings to mind eternal springtime when all was right with the world!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Superb wordsmithing done here.. truly a compliment to love divine in a very intimate and private setting of solitude. Finding harmony from the purity of the water of life with the letter of that special one in the other hand.. very highly profound! Your talent in the romance genre hits so many happy and sad notes with love.. you are truly a great lover in your soul I feel. Very deep! Your opening stanza truly caught my attention with myself having a very high love for water whether it be a stream, river, canal, lake or ocean.. loved:

A moment in time has passed me by
I sit by the edge of the stream.
My hair caressing my shoulders;
along with the sun beating its soft rays down upon me

Nothing more calming and surreal than being by the water's edge.. time passes like an Abyss in such a place.. your writing brought me back for a moment to that very feeling!