"Whirlwind Romance"

Round and round, where do we go. Love is like a spinning wheel sometimes..

 

 

Around and around
Spiraling, falling
We spin out of control
Movements scattered.

No motion do we know
Except desire
Hope, need, wanting
Deeds left open.

For to deal with one day
Here to stay?
Not in this romance
For it is what it is.

This 'Whirlwind Romance'
Out of control
We always are
Like falling from the sky.

Which is where we are
Not a notion do we have
A care for all around
In this 'Whirlwind Romance'.

We will surely be found
Round and round
We go each day
Where we come out.

Neither one of us can say
So we push and shove
Our feelings unglued
Love has a hold of us.

What to do?
Life is funny
For we laugh at ourselves
As we churn inside emotions.

Yet with no where to go
No place of rest
Do we ever see
Just the moment do we seize.

Or does the moments cease to be?
Like an abstract painting
With swirls painted raw
Our love is like the ocean.

The waves overtaking us all
We swim hard as we can
Our arms numb and in pain
In heart we love.

Yet our love has no name
So who is to blame?
Ourselves or the sane?
We question our motives.

Yet no answers do we gain
Like a 'Whirlwind Romance'
We find our love spiraling
Spiraling.. Again


And again..

 

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Ach, that damn spiralling! It never leaves us alone. You are right life is funny. To think it is inside us, all of us. We think of ourselves as individual beings, but are we? Life is in us all. We belong to it. We can't not be. And Life is a bit of a chancer. It is unsure of its existance and does not know where it is going or what it's fate it. All it knows is that it must go on and on. And this is the force that is IN us! When you think about it, it is is like have a wild creature inside us. But what can we do? Keep on spiralling with is, just as you say.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Your style of poetry is perfect for this image you created. I enjoyed this and understand all about that style of romance. This is very nice poem. I love a couple of area in this piece. The 2nd & 6th stanza stood out and will last long in my mind.

[Tate Morgan]

Hmmm well we all want what we cant have and if someone else has it we want two.loll
Tate

[Fran Marie]

Quite lovely is this whirlwind of romance ~ beutifully penned

in poetic expression~ Nice JoB on This onE!!

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot... a very beautifully done piece.... imagery was breath taking in this... your words just flowed smoothing across the page... overall nice job on this...

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Wow! I was swept right up in this whirlwind romance, this is absolutely beautiful. It is like reading a novel, I was so caught up in the beauty of it all.

[deeps]

This whirl wind romance, i like those words alot.
Some romances or if you want to call them that feel that way.
Very well written and well expressed,
Your poem just flows down the page.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Well your word certinaly create a whirlwind of sound and movement spirling faster and faster as the poem progresses well done my Twin