In his minds eye

The mind is a mysterious place. All doors hidden there.

 

 

I am golden fantasy
Painted with petals of minds eye
A canvas of purity
That only he can see.

With each brush stroke
He creates his dream lover
From dreams he holds deep inside
Golden patches of clover.

His eyes close, his thoughts move
Forward to the inner recess deep within
Where fantasy is much like reality
To one such as him.

Brursh strokes move smoothly
My form tightening as paint dries
Naked, I am, the breeze softly moving
Over my form, mingling with his breath.

He moans softly, gentle the tone
Yet agonizing to hear all the same
I stand so very still
For it is now with shame..

I can feel his eyes watching me
Moving over my very form
How did I get here, I whimper softly
Dear God, I want to go home!

Then his hand reaches out
Touching, moving, eagerly
Breathing labored for I am done
His masterpiece.


Of golden fantasy
Painted with petals of minds eye
Each and every night
Till the end of time.

 

Reviews

[R J Askew]

You put your finger on it. The Mind is the most exciting part of any human being, man or woman. Absolutely, and without doubt. And it is capable of great feats of imagination and fantasy, as you describe here. Some wld call this delusional romance, others wld call it a form of derivative reality which does not have the physical limitations of everyday reality. The more we develop this collective human mind the more the latter view will take root I suspect.

[Disturbed mind]

My fav writer here!!!...i love it...

[Sean M. Addams]

very cool piece ... like the concept of this alot... nice detail you have put into this...overall i think you did a great job on this!!!

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

This works so well with the image..I think though .. you need to change : From to Form..a typo in the 3rd verse..still well done..

[deeps]

Whoa! Girl this is most amazing
I loved yoru closing lines the best.
Awesome picture as well
I like this write alot.

[Andie]

I loved the figurative language you used in this.
"Painted with petals of minds eye" wow... what a great line.
Thanks for a great read! :D