Bloody hell

A ittle delight for the season spirt...

 

 

I come in the darkest of hours
Through fog I move about
My whisper is heard through silence
For the meek and weak I shout.

Take their souls, I do
Their very essence of life
The warm scent of blood
Brings me forth in the still of night.

To possess their spirit
Their moments of last ado
Their pathetic screams
Of those lonely desperate fools.

I crawl through filth
Live without fear
Cast out the demons
That live so near.

My domain I protect
My hell on earth
Death surrounds me
No room for any worth.

Only the scent of fear attracts me
The cries for help go unheard
I am hells delight
Come forth from the drudges of the earth.

Come to me, my faint whisper sounds
Bring forth unto me, you
Hear my call sound out
My body my ungodly tool.

To bloodily hell I shall take you
Your cries of pity I shall not care
Tempt you is my destiny
Destroy you is my dare.

I am Satan's helper come to claim you
My undead form roams the earth
Till the moon's ray slowly vanishes
I will take you for all your worth.

 

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

To say this is chilling is an understatement, to say it is erotic is not true others may see it that way, I don't
it say that it fits the season like a glove--- that's right on the money a wonderful scary and good for reciting a round a campfire on a frosty Halloween evening Brrrr and it's not the weather that caused the shiver!

[Fran Marie]

I am Satan's helper come to claim you
My undead form roams the earth
Till the moon's ray slowly vanishes
I will take you for all your worth.






Oooohhhh but this is a bloody good poem fits in well with the halloween season

great stuFF!!

[Lizanne]

The seductress from hell. Came to do her kings bidding and recruit more of the walking dead of the night for him. Take the easiest targets first the weak and meek. Given freedom to roam the darkness of earth's
nights looking to entice the mortal and take their soul. Feeds upon fear and delights in tormenting. Great dark and erotic writing of hells spawn free to roam the upper regions in search of more servants of twilight.

[Tina Kline]

Deadly, tempting and erotic in a lethal dark way.
Love this write!

[Disturbed mind]

"My domain I protect
My hell on earth
Death surrounds me
No room for any worth"

I don't have words to explain what i'm feeling now...this seems so real that if i close my eyes i would see the character of this poetry...so cruel...so dark, but in same time...so sweet...so real...

[Sean M. Addams]

very creepy piece ... perfect for the october season... liked the imagery and detail in this alot... overall very nice job on this!!! liked the 6th stanza alot... great write you have here...

[deeps]

Such a wonderful write here for Halloween spirit
I like this, has a wonderful flow to it.