With lies you so like to undertake...

Words of lies I so despise...

 

 

You promised roses

Instead I received thorns

You talked of dreams

Yet sent forth great storms.

 

Of lies and endless decay

For all you ever said

Sweet words meant not a thing

Were only just spoon fed.

 

Of things you thought up

Nothing worth a dime

Instead all you took

Was my precious time.

 

You with your sweet talk

And music of sad tunes

Hell all you sent forth

Turned quickly to ruins.

 

To feel from deep within

Is something you yet to know

It's not something store bought

It's something that grows.

 

In the heart where love is

Where beauty and peace

Rest their weary heads

For a second of sleep.

 

Only then can you say

That you know what they mean

Then with words filled with wonder

Tell me what has been hidden under.

 

For with eyes of doubt

You still walk about 

With pity and sorrow

You face all your tomorrows.

 

Nothing shall change

For within you still remains

A heart filled with rage

No key to unlock, no means of escape.

 

Forever you stay in your gold gilded cage

With no cares on who you take

No worries on who you hurt

No feelings on those you wake.

 

With lies you so like to undertake...

 

So wake up my friend

Before it's too late

Rise and shine and see the glory

Or settle down to your gloom doom story..

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

This is so deep and touches my own heart and soul....i know exactly all these feelings, i drown in them everyday, because of the person who wears them dragging me down with them...
A very well written piece you have here,
a little too close for comfort but i needed to read this!!...gives me some prospective.
Well done!!!

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

wow thats really deep and it is really awsome, continue writing. love it.

[Tate Morgan]

On beehalfg of we worthless men i say this is one of your best .It tells of something you lived through and to me that is what matteres

[Patches I'm not so new..]

A warning to someone that's obvious. A poem of disgust for lies continusily told, promises made, broken again and again that too is obvious this is a wonder of a rant I hope the person hears and heeds the warning
for if not they imperiel a most wonderful friendship if not more.

[Jackson Yang]

Taken for granted by a lover that has made worthless promises. The heartache that overcomes you as you try to free yourself from them. Try to open their eyes so maybe they can finally see what they are doing wrong. But so naive is the man that he may never understand. It reminds me of how some people think love can be measured by the extravagant amout of gifts or the many spoken "I love you" phrases. But a true love does not have to be explained, it is felt by both people. So much so that no words ever need to be spoken. Another great poem.

[Rena]

0.0 d***
this is amazing

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece.... very well expressed ... i thought you did a great job on this kind of thought provoking to me... overall a very amazing write nice work!!!

[deeps]

Wow! Girl!
This is so dang amazing!
Love this so much
I can relate to this emotion so much,
So well expressed.