You take my breath away

My heart jumps ever so softly,
yet enough to let me know it feels such beauty that passes before my eyes.

With tears flowing at such worth
I hold my breath at images as I pass by the darkest hour
and roam with all the stars and softly pass by the moons rays
as they guide me above the darkened velvety skies high above.

Can you see me softly gliding?

Like a whisper in the wind am I.

Gentle and soft.

Then gone once again.

Reviews

[Tony]

I see this as an elusive want, a fear of being captured by something you find to be special, but you would rather be a figment, something that appears, someone to be longed for, but someone who cannot commit and so you are just a whisper in the wind, who comes and goes as you please. Just my opinion. Glad I stopped by to read your work.

Antony

[Arthur Crow]

Really enjoyed your word-crafting here� you created a mood that is painted in colours of the cosmos mixed with gothic hues. Like a whisper in the wind indeed, a breath of enchantment with threads of melancholy takes the reader into a deep journey. Much enjoyed!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

You know already my feelings on this poem for it is the one that drew us together into a beautiful and IMHO
unique relationship this is one that I will always remember as my introduction to an angel