In sleep he watches..

In sleep he watches..

A Poem by Magdelena
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Facination can be so evil within the mind.

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Softly she moves through the cobwebs of his mind
Her form, of memory, for none other could he find
She dances... Her arms in the air, eyes closed
The beat of the music takes over, making her bold

In sleep he watches..

Eyes twitching.. As she moves all around
Her body all across the dance floor, not making a sound
His body jerks. Spasms as he moves closer
To the one desire he has been watching over
  
Movement he feels, like a breeze passing by
Her breath softly touching his cheek, as she lets out a sigh
He moans..His hand reaching out,
thin air he finds, for she's no where about.

In sleep he watches..

His object of desire..
His fuel for all his needs..
In the form of this woman..
This woman he sees..

Tantalizing
Fantasizing
Mesmerizing
Desire gone wrong..

He reaches out to touch her  
Then realizes.. Too late
She's gone..


In sleep he watches..

© 2009 Magdelena


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scary

you are one scary lady

*Another gold star for you*

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is frightening a good hollowe'en piece this but a nightmare just the same.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Passion can bring such intense fantasies... i found this very riveting and fascinating. A bit dark but still some what beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Too dark for me It gives me nightmares

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

dark but thought provoking to me liked the imagery in this alot... i like the ending to this alot too.. overall a very amazing write...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 16, 2009
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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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Hello to all; Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so.. more..

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