Who�s to say this isn�t love?

Who�s to say this isn�t love?

A Poem by Magdelena

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 We escape you and I.
In a world all our own.
Our love we share,
Is one I have never known.
 
Your touch,
Sweet, tender, bringing forth my truth and dreams.
On lips of golden bliss,
I am forever in your spell and all it brings.
 
Send forth your passion,
For I shall answer with my own and more.
Bring me to the heights of forbidden love,
Where memories shall form on heavens door.
 
I sigh...
Your whispered words in my ear,
Make me faint with need.
Take me to the brink of treasured dreams.
 
Hidden from all.
We are alone in our world from prying eyes.
Together we shall remain,
Until the new morning rise.
 
Then once again, we float...
Back to where the normality has once again become real.
Those few treasured hours,
Were ours alone to steal.
 
So who’s to say this isn’t love?
 
These precious times when our love was real.    

 

 

 

 

 

 

Photo Courtesy (c) of Tinypic

 

© 2009 Magdelena


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Wow.. such passion felt in the emotions that poured here! Sounded almost like a lover's tryst.. or just a different level of love and passion? Love can be soooo many things.. passion.. the same! We can love so many things that we can not touch, hold nor keep.. yet do we love it? Something maybe to ponder here.. it can be deep admiration.. or something we LOVE about someone or something. If this was a tryst.. can it be love.. in my own mind yes we can love more than one.. but not in a healthy way.. if attached to another.. it can cause much pain in the end for all parties.. hopefully this is the beginning of a relationship that blossoms to something much higher... certainly stirs the mystery and curiosity to know more or the ending to this story. Ending questioning on almost hopeful note that it really may have been love.. how many people out there can really relate to that!!! lol.. the number I am sure would be very high! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This was wonderful My Dove, this is a lover's dream nuff said on this in public No not true I must add I am overwhelmed by the wonder of this write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. such passion felt in the emotions that poured here! Sounded almost like a lover's tryst.. or just a different level of love and passion? Love can be soooo many things.. passion.. the same! We can love so many things that we can not touch, hold nor keep.. yet do we love it? Something maybe to ponder here.. it can be deep admiration.. or something we LOVE about someone or something. If this was a tryst.. can it be love.. in my own mind yes we can love more than one.. but not in a healthy way.. if attached to another.. it can cause much pain in the end for all parties.. hopefully this is the beginning of a relationship that blossoms to something much higher... certainly stirs the mystery and curiosity to know more or the ending to this story. Ending questioning on almost hopeful note that it really may have been love.. how many people out there can really relate to that!!! lol.. the number I am sure would be very high! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 5, 2009
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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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Hello to all; Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so.. more..

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