For I can see you....

 

Helpless

Alone

Oh what a sin

I must now condone.

 

No tears for the lonely

No sorrow for the fool

Burn baby burn

Yes, I mean you!

 

Myself I see

In the mirror of all

Broken, chipped

Invisible and small.

 

Nothing inside

Empty like a shell

Just air flowing through

with nothing to tell.

 

Can you see me?

Feel me, as I hold out my hand?

I touch you, yet only air

My fingertips bare.

 

I am a void

large and full of gloom

As I look around

Words whispered, this is your doom.

 

Repeating over and over

Like an old sad song

I hear nothing else

Except where did I go wrong?

 

~~~~

 

Helpless

Alone

Mirror broken, chipped

Through and through

Can you see me?

 

 

Can you see me?

For I can see you....

   

 

 

Photo Courtesy (c) of Tinypic

Reviews

[Art Sun]

looking through the mirror...either looking at someone else and their frustrations or at oneself wondering of ...

reflections...nice work Mags...

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Scary this deeply emotional, too emotional, a dark piece, a haunting piece a black hole in a soul that knew better yet went ahead anyway disreguarding the terrible consiquences

[fallen angel]

looking back at ones life...deep emotions in this write... expressed well