In the darkness of the night

In the darkness of the night

A Poem by Magdelena
"

Sometimes within ourselves comes everlasting peace..

"




In the darkness of the night
I search for you
My hands feeling the walls
Of your mind.

Your thoughts
I softly touch
Flooding them with everlasting light
Let them carry you I say.

Along the path of moments of peace
To sanction, surreal dreams
Wonder of all tomorrows
Take away your deepest sorrows.

Softly I sooth you..
Caressing your inner memory
Of a simple moment in time
Captured of the utmost joy.

'Remember'
I softly whisper.

Like a breeze
I am.

Feel me move past you?
Within you?

The flames softly flickering
In your thoughts.

Of me
Of peace
Dreams of treasured thoughts
Distant music of far-away lands.

Hear it,
Playing softly?
Over and over again
Soothing your every senses.

Listen..

Ahhh, yes...
Close your eyes
Let it gently caress the darkness around.

Oh the sweetness it brings...

Play on..

Play on..

Yes...

In the darkness of the night
I search for you.

My hands feeling the walls
Of your mind.
 

© 2012 Magdelena


Author's Note

Magdelena
www.johnpicacio.com/2009 Artist_John Picacio’s dreamscape for George Alex Effinger’s A Thousand Deaths.

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WOW! That's about all I can say. This is very moving!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautifully written! I love how you capture the essence of how the thought of your lover can push you to strive through rough times etc. as if they were communicating with you in mind and spirit when physically separated. Crazy how the human mind can be so imaginative and how powerful the mind can be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


One can get lost in the whispers of perfect imagery that we may behold this lovely poem of love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


fine

Posted 12 Years Ago


fine

Posted 12 Years Ago


I have missed reading your work!! I am always swept up into the magic of your words...so much emotion is poured in it and you weave your soul through in a way that always touches my imagination!!

K

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Aya
This is amazing i felt every sentence, deep feelings and well great work :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful! the whispers of a loving, healing spirit form, softly whispering to the dreamer; "hear it playing softly? Yes I do.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 17, 2012
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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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