Broken

Nothing is as broken as it seems.

Broken dreams,

But still, they smile.

Broken smiles,

But still, they laugh.

Broken laughs,

But still, they love.

Broken hearts,

But still, they dream.

Author's Note

I was thinking about adding on
Everyone is broken
But still, they try.
At the end, but I didn't think it fit that well so I decided not to put it. Hope you guys enjoyed!

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Good call. The ending now is golden. It needs no more added. It's the perfect progression to a great kicker, and it implies every necessary aspect with only the words on the page (and what's more, it's so well constructed that it compensates itself for the lack of rhymes). Well done!

[Madilyn]

Thank you! Ikept reading it and it didn't sound right but I wanted to put it at the bottom so people got some of my completed ending

[Anjali]

Such a great message you are trying to send.... Absolutely beautiful!

[Madilyn]

Thank you so much!

[Anjali]

You are welcome