La Justo Toma Tiempo

This is about my past mistakes. Also, this is my first poem in spanish.

Estoy triste y decepcionado

Me perdí en la oscuridad

Perdi me voz

Estoy avergonzado de lo que hice

De lo que me converti

Yo dijo “ No, yo no entraria ese”

Pero lo hice

¿Por que?

Porque estoy estupido

Pero asi es como aprendes

¿Correcto?

Su dificil a perdonarte

Su mas dificil amarse a si mismo

No te preocupes, enfermo llegar alli

La justo toma tiempo

Author's Note

As I mentioned this is my first time writing a poem in spanish. So, if I did mess up please let me know because I want to learn how to write poems in spanish. Thank you!

Reviews

[emipoemi]

......I was going to write my review in spanish, but as you're a beginner, I will stick to English. I have soooo many questions regarding meaning of lines, of the what you want to say affects how the language would be constructed. I'll be able to better help you if you were to add a translation of the poem and then I'll lead you line by line. I have no idea how Lovely Poet was able to understand everything (mind you, the gist is comprehensible, but not the poem as a whole), but I kind of question their proficiency in the language when they write "oscuridad" with a "b" (translator, perhaps? who knows). Anyway, if you'd like help, I'll be willing to provide my linguistic AND poetic services. Simply provide the translation and let me know.

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Tienes razón. Asi es como todo aprenden pues no tengas miedo en los momentos de obscuridad y dolor, tienes que esperar por la luz. Bravo!!!