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Gliding through still water

Obtuse to the world beyond the sea

Sensations crash through me

As your eyes fall in my direction

I whisper to the wind

Are you lover’s madness?

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

lovers' madness? interesting theme. i believe, lovers're mad but in love. love makes everyone "gliding through still water, & whispering to blown winds.." very nice imagery you've come up with!

[M.A.]

Thank you so much for your review.

[WillaDanvers]

This is so full of air to breath - in that, one can read this and take something away that someone else may not have seen. Each can have their own opinions, and see different things in this as it is simple and so effective. Great job!

[M.A.]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad you were able to take something away from this.

[Lorry]

Love this. The stillness of the water conflicting with the intensity of thought within the mind, that no matter the momentary piece we find, will always find a way to shock us from our stillness. That is what I read in your perfectly captured words.

[M.A.]

Thank you so much for your review and taking the time to read this. I am glad you were able to get this train of thought from this.

[Lorry]

You're very welcome :)